I like this chapter. There are still a number of typo and mistakes like saying "..." Tyler "..." and forgetting the said but, for the most part, it's just small things.
I feel like, as a reader, we have about the same amount of information as Tyler does as we're following more so with his journey into the Candlelight, which is an interesting subject to balance with Morrigan's knowledgable perspective intermixed. Morrigan is such an interesting character: she goes from being terrified to pretty much flirting with Tyler in an instant. It's a strange personality, but I think you're doing fairly well at handling it. I'm excited to learn more about The Prestige, especially in Morrigan's use of it.
Oof, after the last one I hoped it would get better. Lol I missed a jemma again, but I'm glad it's working well.
I definitely want the reader to learn as Tyler does, and it is a challenge to balance that with Morrigan, its why its rare for her pov to show up.
Morrigan likes to push things down, deflect , and keep control. It's kind of part of her arc. She's a cultist, the villain in most stories. I wanted her to be more complex compared to Tyler.
Oof. Too soon. Thanks again my friend! I'm glad it's working out, and if you're super busy, don't feel pressures to read. I am patient. Lol if someone wants to read, they will in their time.
I like this chapter. There are still a number of typo and mistakes like saying "..." Tyler "..." and forgetting the said but, for the most part, it's just small things. I feel like, as a reader, we have about the same amount of information as Tyler does as we're following more so with his journey into the Candlelight, which is an interesting subject to balance with Morrigan's knowledgable perspective intermixed. Morrigan is such an interesting character: she goes from being terrified to pretty much flirting with Tyler in an instant. It's a strange personality, but I think you're doing fairly well at handling it. I'm excited to learn more about The Prestige, especially in Morrigan's use of it.
Oof, after the last one I hoped it would get better. Lol I missed a jemma again, but I'm glad it's working well. I definitely want the reader to learn as Tyler does, and it is a challenge to balance that with Morrigan, its why its rare for her pov to show up. Morrigan likes to push things down, deflect , and keep control. It's kind of part of her arc. She's a cultist, the villain in most stories. I wanted her to be more complex compared to Tyler.
Oof. Too soon. Thanks again my friend! I'm glad it's working out, and if you're super busy, don't feel pressures to read. I am patient. Lol if someone wants to read, they will in their time.