Really enjoyed this chapter. Gergar is instantly likeable, and the mix of humor with real danger during the chase works very well. The crows were especially interesting, they added an eerie, almost ominous feeling that made the forest feel alive. I also liked the idea of an orc without the Rage, it makes Gergar feel different in a meaningful way.
I'm curious though, are the crows meant to be watching him for a reason, or is something bigger already taking an interest in Gergar?
Really enjoyed this chapter. Gergar is instantly likeable, and the mix of humor with real danger during the chase works very well. The crows were especially interesting, they added an eerie, almost ominous feeling that made the forest feel alive. I also liked the idea of an orc without the Rage, it makes Gergar feel different in a meaningful way. I'm curious though, are the crows meant to be watching him for a reason, or is something bigger already taking an interest in Gergar?