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Ska and Compo were the most skilled at slipping though the other pack territories to the Night Market to pawn off each treasure, earning them a fair amount of coin and any shortfalls were pilfered and raided easily enough to keep the pack living comfortably, even in squalor. Their nest was never lacking for indulgences, even if it did mean six different omegas having to bicker over how things should be arranged and smell and the weeks leading up to heats where a contestant passive aggressive fight on the arrangements.
 
Usually the whole pack would sleep there, but as internal clocks clicked down, Killer would be the first to find himself unwanted - leaving a stink to everywhere he settled - and then Kidd next, whose pup smell just negated anything they set up. Ska and Hop where kicked next - their noses not as refined, and there for 'unhelpful'. The four would watch from Kidd's pup den by his workshop, or from Killer's den in the lighthouse tower, until the Heat started to ramp up, and the betas
 
The number of omegas in their pack overrode any hunger for an alpha, the ferociously and desperation of heats reduced to lazy orgies, and having a pup around kept heats short and mellow. Even if he wasn't /their/ pup, his child scent was so strong in their collective nest, having him there dulled the desire to breed into non-existence, leading to a lot of snuggling of omega and older beta alike. And when he eventually got bored of basking in their adoration, and wandered off, there were plenty of others to help scratch the itch.
 
Twice a year, at the height of fall and spring, pack Eustass hunkered down at its most vulnerable. Ska and Hop on the inside, keeping them safe and fed, hydrated and tended to. Killer, and Kidd by the last few days, on the outside, body or two of trespassers caught sniffing around piled for disposal once the week was said and done.


 
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paroled the nest each time, taking the safety of their crew far more seriously than most of their age should, but that's why he was leader after all.
 
 
 
he'd be overtly tactile with them as they wandered out
 
 
 
scenting and rubbing cheeks before either UK or Bubblegum would roll their eyes and - being the most tactile of the group - would haul their tiny teenage boss up and aggressively rub their heads together, leaving Killer's already messy greasy hair up in an absurd cowlick
 
 
UK didn't seem to mind if he ended up wearing Killer's sour smell for a few hours, and Bubblegum as a bonded omega already had a warp scent of the world and was very vocal in arguing Killer had a lovely mint smell to him that was most likely just bubblegum's own alpha he was smelling as some weird scent projecting
 
 
kidd would take their rubbing much more gracefully, short red hair already spiked up from a lifetime of treatment of Killer doing much the same on a daily basis
 
 
even letting Ska prop him up in what might of been a hug, studying the young man's face and frowning at whatever he found there. The two had the most uneasy relationship, Ska still forever regarded with a protective suspicious air when it came to Kidd
 

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They thrived on the coast in a way very few pack before them did, easily driving away interlopers and other upstart packs from the north. Sea protected them from the south and the west, leaving only the outer city to the east as a threat. But the land was narrow and Pack Punk was ruthless, and a turf war between them was going to happen long before Hearth let some outsider trespass for a shot at his rivals.
 
Even their rivalry was toned down as of late. Last winter, Hearth and Wire themselves had walked right up to the lighthouse, wanting to negotiate a cease-fire. Something had the other pack leaders on edge, and while neither seemed keen on sharing anytime soon, something in Hearth's demeanor had Killer's full attention.
 
When asked later, Killer would shrugged and just said, he smells like he needs help. It was said so nonchalantly, that UK had placed a hand on his forehead, checking for fever, and only slightly meaning the gesture as a jest. Killer had scowled, but leaned into the touch regardless, even giving him a sarcastic irritated growl and head butt when UK grinned and pulled his hand away.



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Killer'd been picking more fights with the local Alphas,
 
The first hint should have been the angry muttering of the alpha's that Killer ran off; they seemed to be even more put off by Killer's smell than any of the omegas. At first it seemed nobody liked his smell - but there was something else - something they should have noticed.
 
Pup's did. Pup's besides Kidd. Pup's from other packs. They would crowd him in town. They would follow him around until Kidd eventually ran them off. He was the pied piper of children, a duckling line of them following him everywhere though the markets.
 
Distressed omegas too. His crew was more than aware that he was good at finding them, but they'd forgotten how good he'd smelled to them too in the beginning; His angry prepubescent growling almost soothing, a deep chest rumble that chased away nightmares in the late evening hours. Only Bubblegum seemed to remember; he still swore up and down that the rest of them where crazy - Killer smelt divine. He'd rub himself all over Killer to prove his point, just making the sour smell worse for the rest of them.
 
They'd dismissed him - his prior bonding must have messed with his nose.
 
Tea tree and mint, Bubblegum had called it. Burning rubber and rotting leaves was more like it.

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Kidd had turned fourteen over the summer, Killer was 18 now, and bets had started to be made on when and if their pup would end up presenting. Quincy also had a betting pool going on how long it would take Killer to have his first rut - her having long started to suspected the smell of pup having effected him just as much as the rest of them. After all, the two of them had been sleeping in a pile together longer than the rest of them had been part of their gang. She was sure Killer was all pent up and grumbly and sour smelling because he'd been cockblocked since puberty.
 
She was closer than anyone had realized, yet so, so wrong.
 

 

Hip was heading for the kitchen to get some of the snacks they'd prepped when she spots him in the early dawn light, sitting just outside the threshold, curled tight up on himself.

Some part of her always knew Killer was younger than her, but he never looked so .. small.. before. Fearless co-leader of their little pack, Killer - and Kidd - were always a little larger than life - but he wasn't much bigger than her in reality.

She'd figured it out - the first time she saw Kidd; living out here, there wasn't always food to go around. And what food there was went to Kidd first, even if the little heathen didn't know it yet. Leaving a too thin, too small, too hungry Killer in his wake.

More pack meant more mouths, and it was rough in the beginning, she wasn't going to lie. At this point, she was doubtful even presenting would ever make up for the lack of bulk he should have gained in his early teens.

Careful not to move to quiet as to come of as sneaking - Hip approached her tiny leader with one of the containers of carrot-sticks they'd cut earlier. The rest of the crew liked them with fatty dips and the like, but Killer always seemed content to just nibble on them plain.

She touched the back of his head - they were gonna have to talk to him about showering more often again, his hair already greasy and oily under her fingers - "Got a snack for the resident rabbit -" she started only to stop short when he turned to look up at her.

His mouth and jaw were smeared with blood, dark bruise starting under on eye and his gaze was a touch too bright and unfocused.

"Shit boss...." she murmured, kneeling down, "You okay?"

His shirt was open; it looked like every button had been popped off in whatever scuffle he'd been in, bruises and claw marks from someone else on his chest were she could see even with him tucked in on himself like he was.

His nose was still dripping blood, and now that she was outside, she could smell it thick under his own awkward musk.

"We're safe now," he dogged her question, a slight twitch to him as he made a valiant effort to make eye contact even as he failed miserably.

Hip opened the snake box and offered him some food in lue of anything else. What else could she do?

He didn't take them, not at first, and she glanced at his hands to see him raking deep groves into his own left arm with his nails.

He did that sometimes. None of them ever figured out what triggered it, it didn't seem like he knew he did it most times. Kidd was always good about redirecting that energy somewhere else, but right now the little hellion was up with the rest of the pack upstairs.

Hip frowned, setting the food down and gently taking both his hands in her own.

"We're safe now?" she asked him, frowning at the blood on his face. Other than his nose, she had a feeling that was not *his* blood he was wearing then.

"I wont let them hurt my pack." He told her solemnly.

She believed him. She just wished he didn't let them hurt him in their stead.


 


UK knows they've overslept, but honestly, the warm spring sun though the curtain cracks feels so good, he's not all that torn up about it. And the pile of pack he's found himself waking up in is nice too - even if it is Killer currently drooling on his arm. Pack leader though he might be, he's still a waif of a thing, all curled up and snuggled into UK's side, Kidd's red hair spotted out of the corner of UK's eye, using Killer's bony hip as a pillow, legs propped up on Papas' shoulders.

Kidd couldn't sleep normal to save his life.

However, UK's arm is starting to protest, pins and needles sneaking in, and the day is calling.

Yet on the other hand, the sad sleepy whine Killer makes when he starts to pull away could melt the iciest of hearts. 

He's trying to include their feral little leaders more in the sleep nests - its easy enough to include Kidd, the boy just helps himself - but Killer's unique smell makes most of them nauseous given time. Ska and Hip agree he smells weird, but their beta sensibilities don't seem to find it as distressing. It makes UK feel deeply uncomfortable, how the smell makes him and the other omegas want to recoil and push the young man away. Pack should never feel like that about pack. And no amount of bathing seem to fix it - it's clearly not Killer's fault.

There is one shining knight to all of it though, the fact the Bubblegum seems completely unaffected. Or at least effected differently. The bond betrayed omega seems to think Killer smells divine, a mix of soothing teatree and the brightness of mint. And look, the omega's already up and about, and it doesn't take much for UK to catch his attention.

Despite the closeness, Killer had been curled up on himself were he was tucked against UK, seeking comfort but not taking it. Bubblegum stretches once, and then shoos UK away from the nest, slinking into his spot and pulling the young man against him, threading their limbs together as easy as (something easy *shrug*)

Kidd shifted in response, starfisting out so he's got one arm flopped over Killer and bubblegum's legs, the other cradled between the two old men's bodies, knuckles brushing elbows.

Yeah.. their pack leader smell awful. But at the end of the day, he's just a teen, still just an overgrown pup. And he's pack. He needs a good cuddle just as much as the rest of them, even if it means UK needs to go scrub down lest the rotting undertones cling to *him* all day too.

 


{day 3 of eustass pack heat}
kidd feels itchy and leaves to go find killer
  • this is both the normal time he leaves and the normal place he goes
    • but the itch is new
      • the tower smells weird
        • he feels warm and lightheaded
          • he wants killer, feeling far more clingy that usual
            • it just... itches... so .. bad.
              • its hard to focus. its hard to think
                • he needs killer to fix it
 
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Oct 10, 2025 17:47

I just love your story and I have some ideas for you. Can I share them with you

Oct 11, 2025 13:22 by Mekachu ZeroFour

<3 ah! thank you! i know i got something good in this mess, i'm just having a hell of a time trying to clean it up.   i feel i got a mostly strong ending to act one but i need to flesh out the middle and build the characters up more.   what where you thinking? what ideas did you have?

Oct 11, 2025 20:01

I have some ideas for cover art can I share them on another platform that would be easier for both

Oct 12, 2025 19:50 by Mekachu ZeroFour

no. i'm okay - i already have a cover. i was hoping more for help on the writing.   i'm also not comfortable moving any conversations off world anvil. thank you though.

Apr 23, 2026 09:57

This chapter has such a strong emotional pull the way Ember’s inner conflict leaks into the pacing really stood out, especially in those quieter moments where everything feels like it’s holding its breath before something breaks. I also really liked how the dialogue shifts subtly to show how strained Ember is without ever spelling it out too directly.

Apr 25, 2026 22:50 by Mekachu ZeroFour

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